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Jacrispy
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Hello! I am a stupid person who has a DeviantArt account.

I do customs, terrible art sometimes, photography, and some SFM stuff. Not very interesting, I know.
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eagc7 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
happy bday!
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Sideways77 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016
Thank you so much 
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eagc7 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
your welcome :)
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PunchieTheNeko Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Student Artist
:3 Happy birthday, Jacrispy!
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Sideways77 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016
Thanks! 
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seekerblackout Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
muh essay

Things I liked in WOC Season 1:

-It being more strictly focused on a smaller cast of characters is a good idea. Kinda felt like there were too few characters sometimes, but it's been getting to a good amount.
-The humor is less of a focus, but it's still good. All of your comics are good at being funny, really.
-You at least try to do something with all of the characters. (Except for Rattrap) I loved WOTWAE, but there were characters in it that were shoehorned in or just bland. 
-The returning character cameos have been cute. I'd like to see those continue.
-The effects are consistently really good. I'm constantly impressed by how good the facial expressions look.
-Letting there be some mystery for a while on certain things, like Chromia's backstory. Keeps it interesting.

Things I disliked:

-You still struggle with planning and pacing. You planned this comic for a long time, but it feels like you made your mind up on pretty much nothing. And in terms of pacing, well, it's dragged on to almost 100 updates, and I don't think the amount that's happened warrants the length.
-I honestly really don't like Starscream, and not just in a "bah he da villain i want him to die" way. I legitimately have no idea what you're doing with him. Is he completely evil? Is he redeemable? What is his relationship with Windblade? I don't know anymore.
-One thing I really liked about WOTWAE that isn't present here is how much effort you put into background stuff. A lot of figures in the background to represent citizens, little paper signs to represent stores (which had good joke potential) etc. WOTWAE's setting felt more "alive" than WOC's does. You tried to fix this at one point, but it kind of faded away again.
-Balance of character focus isn't great. It's been getting better, but it still feels like you ignore characters for extended periods of time sometimes. I mean, Thundercracker has done like, nothing before now. 
-Copying the assassins plot from WOTWAE. Needless padding.
-Rattrap is a skrub

I hope that's okay. I probably forgot some things, and I'm sorry if I bitch too much. :\
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Sideways77 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2016
'needless padding' its called an homage you shit potato


Who else can cameo
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seekerblackout Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
Hoist hasn't, I don't think
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Sideways77 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
He lame
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seekerblackout Featured By Owner May 13, 2016
Update 2 is the best thing ever made I can't wait to see you play this shit
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Sideways77 Featured By Owner May 13, 2016
It suck
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Sideways77 Featured By Owner May 13, 2016
YEESS
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BrandonsWork Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Student Photographer
Yo, you have Animated Wreck Gar right? He any good?
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Sideways77 Featured By Owner May 11, 2016
Yeah. He's a really fun and expressive figure.
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